Tiger
1. There was a tiger and a puppy swimming in my pool
2. I thought it was cool
3. Till they jumped out and my mum gave a yelp
4. And she screamed help
5. My Mum said no tigers in the pool and that is a rule.
Hi it is Amy.
Today in Rm 7 we did Cybersmart. We went on the Ako Hiko Cybersmart website and we were going to do poems I decided to choose a limerick that is why there are only 5 lines. I thought that the trickiest part was thinking of words the rhymed for 125 and for 34 . My goal for next time is to make a different type of poem that is harder.
Bye blog you later.🐼🐰🐶🐯🐱🐴
Today in Rm 7 we did Cybersmart. We went on the Ako Hiko Cybersmart website and we were going to do poems I decided to choose a limerick that is why there are only 5 lines. I thought that the trickiest part was thinking of words the rhymed for 125 and for 34 . My goal for next time is to make a different type of poem that is harder.
Bye blog you later.🐼🐰🐶🐯🐱🐴
Great limerick Amy. I like the image you found to go with it (is it free to use?) No tigers in the pool sounds like a fair rule to me! Did you try any of the other types of poem?
ReplyDeleteHi Amy my name is Keisomani and I am from Room 23. I like your Limerick that sounded great and I like the way you rimed the story. I didn't even realize it was a poem until I looked at the bottom of the picture.You did a great job,Here is My blog
ReplyDeleteHi Keisomani It is Amy.
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I really like your creative progress that you have on your blog it is really good.
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Kia Orana Amy, my name is Asfan from Room 23. You have done a great job on your Tiger Poem, it is amazing. I liked how you have make your poem and link the words with sentences like a limerick. By my opinion your poem is amazing but still you can add more sentences which makes it more improved. I have a question for you, What is your most favorite Animal. Thanks for sharing your learnng, you can check out My
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Asfan.
Hi Asfan, It is Amy
DeleteMy favourite animal is tiger, puppy or a horse.
I think your blog is great thanks for giving me a link to it 😁
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Kia Ora, mu name is Maria in Room 23 at Owairaka school I really like you poem about tigers, sounds funny but it sound fair to me because it the tiger that bad I really like the way that you made it funny and interesting to read. You should check out my blog <a hrefhttps//odsmariat.blogspot my blog
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Amy my name is Muhennad in Room 23. I thank that you should add more rhyming words and more words keep up the good work blog you later
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Hi Amy. my name is Fahtima I really like your blog post about your tiger poem my favorite part was when the mum said no tigers in the pool thanks for sharing your blog. you should check out My blog
ReplyDeleteHi Amy
ReplyDeletethat is so cool I love the tiger and the puppy!
so cute check out my blog Amy.
and then you can see mine.
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Kia ora Amy.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Koloa. I like your Limerick poem. My favourite part was Till they jumped out and my mum gave a yelp And she screamed help.
Keep up the good poetry
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Koloa`
Kia Ora, my name is Remy and I am in Room 8 at Owairaka District School. I liked the way you rhymed and when your my screamed. You brought me back to when my cat fell into my bath. How did you do it because it seems really hard.
ReplyDeleteIs your Mum actually scared of tigers? Blog you later
Hi Amy, Ted here from your class.
ReplyDeleteThis is a really cool limerick poem it is funny when your mum yells yelp.
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HI Amy. I like your psot ov dog and the dogs swingeing. I like it because i like dogs and dogs swimming. I have a dog code kobe and he can do a big as jump and my other dog is a pap and his name is cod Quan and he can do a big as jump too. Can your dog do it if he can your dog is so cool.
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