Hi bloggers.
I made this short story that I am going to share with you.
Here it is .......
BOOM the noisy helicopter shattered across the muddy soaked ground, the woman’s hands started to sweat and she felt hot and dizzy. She was just lying there on the ground winded as the helicopter burst into flames around her. After a moment she jumped up and ran trying to find the exit. She found the exit and ran out onto the wet grass.Then she tripped rolling down the hill at full speed then she bumped into something fluffy. She looked up and saw a tiger staring right at her. She screamed as the tiger bared its teeth, she was prepared to die but instead the tiger beant down and licked her face. She wiped her face from all the slobber. She realized that the rescue team had come and it was her tiger ‘stripes’. She jumped up and she felt warm and sunny inside. She would be able to go home safe.
Hi Amy, I'm Sariya. I loved your plot twist like how it was her tiger and I loved how you are describe everything. You are amazing at describing I think when you are older you should make a Book!
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Hi Sariya.
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Me and my friends Mikayla, Rita and Charlotte are making book and Me and Mikayla have already made a book.
Bye
Kia ora amy I think your crash Writing is very creative and cool. What would you do if you Experienced an event like that? You should check on my blog and blog you Julie later
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