Hi bloggers!!
Yesterday (25.6.2021) Rm 7 was doing writing on Similes and Metaphors.
Here is my writing it was based on this image........
A colourful hot air balloon floated gently across the sky. The water is a shimmering crystal as the morning sun shines across it. All of a sudden a cool breeze swirled as it passed the hot air balloon. Slowly some fish swam in the calm sea. Later in the day I wanted to jump in the water but I knew my hot air balloon would fly off without me, so I waited. Suddenly, the hot air balloon popped and started swirling down. It was like a tornado. I felt the cold water engulf me. Alarmingly it all went black.
I hope you like my writing.
BYE blog you later
🐶🐯🐱Amy🐴🐭🐼
Wow Amy! This is Madeleine from Waikowhai Primary. This is an amazing piece of writing. I like how you used heaps of adjectives. Maybe next tome you could tell the reader how you got in the hot air balloon and maybe also what happened after everything went black. I hope to see more of you posts soon!
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