In Rm 7 we made some stories about a picture.
These are my favourite sentences.
As she held the orb it suddenly glowed as bright as the sun. The orb exploded as soon as she dropped it when a fox ran past her.
She felt as scared as a kitten that has lost its mum.
She saw the avocado like circles in the forest. As she gingerly stepped through the amber coloured circle she felt more shaken every step she took. Like a cat getting chased by a dog.
I hope you liked my sentences
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Hi Amy I like the first writing it is really good I made one just like that look out my blog
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Kia Orana Amy its Rose from Room 25 i think that all of them are great but my favourite one is the first one because it sounds interesting and because i like foxes
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Kia orana Amy, Charlotte here from room 25!
ReplyDeleteI really like your writing and how you included animals in your writing!
Both of your sentences are amazing!
How long did it take do write this?
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