This week Room 7 was doing some writing and this is my favriote piece of it.
BOOM!!! And then Olive woke up she got dressed and walked outside. Then Ava woke up and walked outside and saw Olive just standing there. Ava had a look and saw the most scariest thing in her life. She was terrified there was a colossal skeleton in front of her it looked like it was from a ginormous mammoth but it was not from Earth. Olive said” look at the markings on it do you know what this means” my mum and dad are scientists they have been studying this it says “ We are here to bring all the dangerous and mythical creatures that you can think of” Ava wait it says one more thing Olive said “it says I am death this earth makes our spirits dissapers so we are here to put earth to an end. when it is a full moon we will come" "is it a full moon tonight?” Olive said Ava just stood the gawping at the giant dead beast.
Olivie and Ava are the main characters (FYI).
The thing I found hardest was accally figuring out what to write. I think my goal for next time is to get better at using descriptive words.
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Hi Amy hope your having fun in lock down
ReplyDeleteThis writing Is really cool I like how you started with a onomatopoeia so it sounds exciting!
Stay safe,
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Rita