Thursday, 20 August 2020

Me and my mums poem

Hi it is Amy. I hope that you are all safe. This is a poem that me and my mum made.

There was a young tiger called saul.

He has a pup friend with a pool.

They splashed and they splished.

And did as they wished.

Until it was then time for school .

I hope you liked our poem.

Have you been doing any poems in lockdown 

BYE BLOG YOU LATER 

2 comments:

  1. Talofa lava Amy, what a fantastic idea to make a poem with your Mum! I think you must have had fun doing this because the result is funny! Would you call this poem a limerick? I can't wait until it's warm enough to be swimming again. Have you thought of creating a Google Drawing of Saul and his friend in the pool? You could check out Matilda's post where she has mixed her own drawing with other images. Here is a link to it:
    Matilda's forest drawing

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  2. Hi Amy
    hope your having fun in lock down
    This is a really cool poem I like how it rhymes It makes it flow better right
    I feel like this is a limerick maybe I'm not sure but it was cool anyways!
    Stay safe,
    Byeeeeeeeeee
    Rita

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