Hi blogger here is my writing..
I am riding on my trusty steed Moonlight as we gallop back to the castle as the shadows chase us. The castle is so close but it seems so far away and they are catching up. I am not sure if we can make it. I see my friend Mia opening up the stable door for us. As we speed up the shadows suddenly stop I look back as we ride into the stables. They know they can’t get into the castle because Me and Mia set up a protection barrier. But it will only hold for a little while because Me and Mia are only starter wizards and the only thing that is left to teach us is a book, the other wizards died in a battle against the shadows many years ago.It’s very late but Me and Mia are still up trying to think of plans to do when the barrier breaks ‘What if it breaks and we are away or what if they get in before we put up another one’ Mia worriedly says ‘It will be terrible if it breaks and we are away or if they get in but I hope that won’t happen and if it does we are probably done for and we should let the army and other people to handle it’ I say.Neigh I hear the horses alarmed neigh then I hear BANG ‘We need to go see what is happening NOW’ I say ‘What if Misty and Moonlight got stolen!!’ Mia says. All I do is grab her by the arm and then we both slide down the rugged ladder down into the stables and see a pitch black shadow as my bare foot touches the freezing cold ground the shadow turns around, grabs the horse and runs. ‘NO’ says Mia ‘Stop get back here’ I say Mia starts to run after her I start running to but it is to late we were to slow.
Bye blog you later!!!
Yikes, what a cliffhanger Amy! I hope the girls get out of this adventure unscathed. Can you think of other ways to describe yourself and Mia? If you used things like ... The girls, the duo, we.... then your story wouldn't sound as repetitive. Are you going to continue writing this story? blog you later, Megan
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