Friday, 14 May 2021

My favourite piece of writing📝

Hi bloggers it is Amy!

In Rm seven the thing we are focusing on for writing is setting descriptive scences.

It was really hard to think of things to describe the haunted house but my favourite part is that it is a haunted house.

This one is based on a haunted house here is the image and my writing is down bellow....

As I was wondering down an broken brick road in a deep dark eerie forest and It was a murky pitchblack night. As I walked up to the house I could hear bats squeaking and flapping above the creaking house as it stood like a giant towering over me. I could feel the thick fog swirling around me.  

I walked up to the house like a turtle, I was so scared but I just had to see what was inside. CREEK was the sound that the door made when I opened it but immediately I regretted it. “Hello” I heard a  creaky voice say “AHH” I screamed as a cold hand pulled me into a room. 

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