Hi bloggers,
Today I have another story that I was writing.
It was not that hard to do it was all pretty easy.
It was really fun to make here it is....
Paragraph one .....
Slowly I walked towards the door it was the smell of smoke that drew me towards the door
“Get back Izzy” my dad shouts, shaking me
“What am I doing here” I ask
“That does not matter right now just get out of the house, grab the horses and Maple then go to the edge of the forest” He replies
“But why and what is that smell?” Still wondering what I was doing at the top of the basement steps with my pyjamas on.
“Just go” he says as he ran to get the fire extinguisher “Muffins my Muffins she is down there my poor kitten” I say “I will get her now go” My dad says running into the fire “NO DAD” I shout through my tears but only silence replied my shout Smash
“Go Izzy run I am so sorry Muffins is dead and I am trapped go Izzy go to Mia’s house you will be safe from them there!”
My dad shouts coughing in the smoke I knew that when the coughing of my father stopped that he was dead so I ran barely able to see through my tears then I went to Mia’s house riding Lemon my horse who was the only one left the others had suffered the same fate as my father and Muffins so I grabbed the small carriage and attached it onto the saddle lifted Maple my only dog up into the carriage hopped onto the horse and left my house that was burnt to a crisp by then.
Paragraph 2
“Izzy hurry come inside darling you look hurt what happened!” Said Mia’s Mum rushing out of the door when she saw me
“My dad h-he is g-g-one in the fire so is m-m-muffins and the rest o-of the h-horses” I say heartbroken
“Come sit down you must be hungry and sad I know that your dad was the only parent you ever knew so this must be hard for you now tell me did you go near the fire” she said
“I went into the bas-sement where the f-f-fire was and it was in a ring shape but then my dad took me away” I relied
“Oh no, Mia get here now we are leaving hurry” She shouted
“I am here what is wrong mum?” She said not noticing me “ Quickly we have to leave they are coming for you go to Ruby and Emily’s houses give their parents this note take Dorris and Rufus it will comfort Maple she must be stressed out go Time is of the essence” She said giving us a carriage full of food and water then attaching it onto Dorris Mia hoisted Rufus up
“You are a heavy pup aren't you Rufus I wish I knew what breed you and your sis Maple are now comfort Maple she looks scared” she says to Rufus then we set off we took Ruby and Emily with us and got two more carriages plus Dandy and Cookie the horses also Alfie and Milly the dogs. We set off to the Pearl temple where Ruby’s mum told us to go….
Paragraph 3
“KNOCK KNOCK” Mia knocks on the grand pearly white doors to the entrance of the Pearl temple
“What is the password” says a gruff voice we all look around and see a nutcracker guard standing on the right of us
“Oh um I don’t know the password” I say hoping he doesn’t throw us into jail.
“Let them in, I know why they are here” says a queenly voice.
Creeeeeeeeeackkk the door of the temple opens so slowly it is agony.
“Hurry up make the doors go faster hurry, hurry I want to meet the girls” the voice says again
“Yes your majesty” says the nutcracker soldier. When the doors finally open a bright light greats them
“Girls hello I am queen pearl and welcome to the pearl temple where dragon halflings learn about flying and transforming” says queen pearl dressed in a long pearl white dress and long blonde hair embedded with small pearls topped of with a pearl crown.
“What is this place and why are we here? We are not part dragon!” says Emily
“Why of course you are that's why they are coming for you and that's why you have to go to pearl Island the only safe place for dragon halflings'' Pearl replies
“Now come on you have to start training right now” she also says
A WHILE LATER…… “AHHHH graven run for your lives the underworlds army are coming for us “Girls go now take this map and leave we will care for your animals I am sorry you can not take them but it is to dangerous” Shouts queen Pearl over the racket
“But what are graverns and why do we have to go?” I ask
“Graverns are dangerous creatures, I can't tell you much more you have to go now” she replies
“ Yes queen Pearl we will go now” Mia says. OOF I keep on tripping up with all the mess
“JUMP” Shouts Emily as we run off the cliff
“We did it we are dragons” I say surprised. BANG I look back startled as the building got set alight the fire blazed bright there was thick dark blood everywhere but we were going to somewhere safe plus there would be others like them there. It would be paradise.
THE END
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