Coin operated planning

Hi bloggers,

The last week we (Rm 7) have been working on a story called coin operated but first we did planning so here is my planning.

Here is also a photo of it....

One sunny afternoon the boy held his toy rocket and ran along zooming it up and down.

The boy around 6 ran around his mum flying his toy rocket then stopping abruptly.

The Boy hops in the rocket and puts in his money but it does not work the way he wants it to so he sets up a lemonade stand.

He waits and waits and sells lots of lemonade then he saves up a huge huge bag of money.

He saves up lots of money than he puts it in the rocket and it blasts into space.

The 5-6 year old boy turns into a really old person.

The difficult thing to do this was probally trying to make the sentences small..

The easiest thing about it was writing the story but I have only finished 3 quarters of it so I will not post it yet.

Here is the video we watched 

Coin Operated LInk

Have you seen coin operated? 

Bye blog you later!!!