🎁The present🎁

 HI bloggers,

Last week Rm 7 did a writing called the present and it was very fun to do!

The hard thing about it was probally trying to add the thing about the boys leg at the end.

The easy part was probally doing it from the prospective of the dog.

The video we watched was quite sad for the dog at the start.

Here is the link to it!

The present video!

Here is my writing about it...... 

As the sun was setting and a boy around 12 with brown hair sat glued to his video game. Creak his mum walked through the door carrying a brown soggy cardboard box “You should get off that game it’s bad for you to sit on it all day” said the mum she dropped the cardboard box in front of the boy “go ahead open the present honey” “for me?” the mum didn’t answer because she was too busy on the phone that had started ringing. Gingerly boy opened the box and an adorable dog jumped out “Cool a dog” the boy carefully picked the dog out of the box the boy then saw that the dog was missing a leg “Arg nevermind'' said the boy angrily as he roughly threw the dog on the floor. When the dog was upside down the dog saw a red squeaky ball and he turned over and pounced at it. He stumbled along with his stump for a leg falling over but getting back up. Happily the dog played and the boy kept on looking down at him. Finally the boy gave in. He lifted himself up with one missing leg like the dog and grabbed his crutches. “I’m going to be outside” the boy called to his mum then they both stumbled out the door and started to play fetch happily.

The End!

 The dogs perspective.....

I wake up and I can’t see anything but it’s not night it's day ‘what do I do’ I think to myself.  OOF, I hit something hard and I can hear voices saying “go ahead open the present honey” the woman’s voice said and a boy's voice say “for me?”   Suddenly a bright light shines in my face.  I jump out and my vision is still a little fuzzy but it’s a new place I have to explore.  AAAH something grabs me so I look away “cool a dog” the boy's voice says I look at the thing holding me it is the boy.  Suddenly I get thrown on the ground but I don’t care because I see a red squeaky ball and I want to play with it. Hurriedly I turn over off my back and pounce at it. Then it rolls into a box but I keep pouncing at it then it goes black again. ‘Who turned the lights out?’ I think to myself then I realize I was in the box. I lift it off myself and go to the boy. I jump up at him with the ball in my mouth. Oww he kicked me away and it hurt but I don’t care I am going to get this boy to play with me if it is the last thing I do!!!! I jump back up and he kicks me again. I jump up one more time but this time I don’t get kicked and the boy stands up. He grabs these weird stick things then he shouts “We are going outside Mum” then I notice he had a missing leg like me “Yay!” I bark.

🦴🐶THE END🦴🐶 

Have you watched this video before?

Whos to perspective would you write from?

Bye blog you later!