Welcome to my blog! This is a place where I can share my learning. My blog is a collection of questions, ideas, learning in progress and finished work. This year our school focus is "In Our Backyard". Please make comments so I can deepen my understanding, learn about new ideas and improve my work. Thank you for taking the time to support my learning journey!
Hi Amy....Yes I do like your slides, your writing is interesting to read as you have made a great choice of words....eg unstable ground .. and .. the sky was capped in thick growing smoke. Keep up the great writing, it doesn't need to be long but it does need to be interesting to read...."It was a terrifying sight" certainly caught my attention!!!
Kia ora Amy. Wow there are some really great descriptive word choices here. I particularly liked 'lightning twisted across the sky'. Word choices are really important, it helps the reader to imagine and create a picture in their mind. Keep up the awesome work Amy!
Hi Amy....Yes I do like your slides, your writing is interesting to read as you have made a great choice of words....eg unstable ground .. and .. the sky was capped in thick growing smoke. Keep up the great writing, it doesn't need to be long but it does need to be interesting to read...."It was a terrifying sight" certainly caught my attention!!!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Amy. Wow there are some really great descriptive word choices here. I particularly liked 'lightning twisted across the sky'. Word choices are really important, it helps the reader to imagine and create a picture in their mind. Keep up the awesome work Amy!
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